Your best writing.

Your best writing is —

Peanut butter smoothed into

buttery hot sourdough

in a frost-paned kitchen with

$20 lest to your name and

Nowhere to go but still

A warm dry house.

It’s

That point post-orgasm  when

you feel the teeth of your lover

dig into the flesh of your shoulder

and eyes meet in a flash of recognition of

the sheer perfection of the moment.

It’s

Standing on the stairs finding

shelter from the rain as you

seek the optimal vantage pint for a snap of that sun-rain contrasted boat

on the river.

It’s

The satisfaction of sinking into

your own window seat on a Greyhound bus

then the flood of relief as it pulls you away

from the exact reason(s) you should stay.

Your best writing is —

All in the feel.

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